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Video of my 2nd time doing stand up comedy

Discussion in 'The Okie Corral' started by Hussell_Crowe, Feb 22, 2013.

  1. saddlebum

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    You're not funny, most people aren't. I give you credit for posting your performance!

    People laugh at things they have experienced or can see the irony in. This is the problem (hopefully) with your material. You don't connect with your audience in that way. Therein lies your problem. You seem to have to search out extremes to try to garner laughs. I'd like to help you further but the world doesn't need another liberal comedian.
     

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    Sadly, Chris, that's all you'll ever have as long as you keep failing at dating lesbians.
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    I made it through half and it was painful to watch.
     
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    I think the funniest thing would be if you invited me on stage and let me kick you in the nuts repeatedly for voting democrat! Lmao! Just kidding.... but seriously that would be funny! Crowds love nut shots! Lmao! But seriously.... i havent watched it but i still give you props for being brave enough to do it! Good job! Let me know if im hired for the job of nutsack kicker!

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  7. PaulMason

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    Look up the definition of awkward and creepy.
     
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    So fits the liberal stereotype.
     
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    :animlol:___Barbers need repeat customers and tips.
    Why would anyone return?__:rofl:
     
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    That was good. :rofl:
     
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    Ouch, calling me a liberal really hurts, such a biting statement, I may just retire from comedy based on that well worded destruction you just laid upon thee.

    You have every right to think I'm not funny, maybe you're right, but I did it-which is more than I can say for you. Why don't you write some material, perform it on stage, and upload it to the internet? I'll gladly judge your performance.

    And Chute, you're a one trick pony, if calling me bald is the best you've got, you need to try a little harder.

    And awkward was what I was going for, my entire set was about awkward moments-so if I came across that way, I did my job.
     
  12. Hussell_Crowe

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    PBC, you look like Butthead from the classic MTV show-no offense.
     
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    None of it was particularly funny but i think youll get better. None of it was particularly terrible either but some of it was pretty creepy and awkward. Tone down the creepiness.

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    Nick, thanks for the CONSTRUCTIVE feedback sir, I appreciate it. And I agree to an extent, my next show is March 10th, I'll have new material, and I'll try to be less creepy.
     
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    No prob - I get it all the time. Thankfully I have a buddy that looks like Bevis so it makes for good Holloween costumes.
     
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    Comedy is supposed to be funny and entertaining. That set was not funny or entertaining.
     
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    Can anyone recommend a good, cheap camcorder? this show was shot with a camera phone, which is less than ideal. I don't have 1200 bucks to spend on something super crazy, but I need something that has good audio, and a decent picture. The smaller the better.
     
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    I personally think the nun/black girl joke is my best bit-maybe some people don't know people call black girls sister? I don't know. I think I should have opened with that.

    And 427, thank you for your feedback, like I said, it was all new material, I now have a better idea for what works and what doesn't.
     
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    Is the thing about you being a liberal and Oboma voter true? Or, is that supposed to be a joke?


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