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Short film I just made about customer service

Discussion in 'The Okie Corral' started by Powerkicker, Apr 28, 2012.

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  1. Powerkicker

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    My third attempt at a short (4 minutes) is now finished and ready for criticism. It is a comedy about a Star Wars nerd who works in a gun distributor's customer service shop and will resort to any lengths to deny a refund. He is also a highly skilled craftsman with only the finest of tools to ply his trade.

    It is a light comedy and based on the criticisms on my last short, I worked on changing shots more during dialogue and just generally tying to keep the shots less static. I also have added a bit of public domain music and that was a first as well as I progress towards competency.

    Any honest input, positive or negative, is highly appreciated.

    [ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=irjvRRLy_RU"]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=irjvRRLy_RU[/ame]
     
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