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Got punched in the mouth today!!!

Discussion in 'The Okie Corral' started by Eurodriver, Nov 10, 2012.

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  1. deserttactical45

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  2. Harper

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    It's hard to believe a real person said that. It sounds more like bad writing by someone trying to convey the gist of a story. It's too dry and doesn't convey the emotion of someone about to throw a punch.
    So work on your character development and then dialogue.
     

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    Chaos S.n.a.f.u.

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    Didn't know that GT had a /b/ section

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    His life is epic, isn't it?
     
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    Deployment Solu Kydex Crafter

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    So the daughter is thinking....my DAD kicked his ass...no way he'll be able to protect this body!! ( or get any of it either!!!) LOL!!!
     
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    I'd like to buy the dad a beer.
     
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    You weren't guy on Untold Stories Of The ER yesterday that got his unit stuck in the campstove were you?
     
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    That sounds like a hundred different stupid commercials for beer and body spray. So, what did you really get punched for?
     
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    Mom and daughters are tarts. Dad/husband knows it...this isn't his first rodeo with this bunch...you just happen to be dork enough to get owned by them is all.
     
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    You should get another punch in the head for texting while driving.
     
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    Eurodriver doesn't care about black people.
     
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    How do we know he was actually a Marine? He sure doesn't act like one.
     
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    TBO Why so serious? CLM

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    How old was the daughter's child?

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    No response yet? Damn.
     
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    Annoyedgrunt Dry Heat my ASS

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    Well, this is a train-wreck of a thread that isn't going anywhere good. May as well help it along:

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    Grandma kicked your ass and this is the best cover story you can come up with?
     
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    Annoyedgrunt Dry Heat my ASS

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    I like being an internet tough guy. I can say things on here that would get me punched in the mouth in real life. :wavey:
     
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