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Discussion in 'Through-the-Lens Club' started by DeadMansLife, Sep 14, 2007.
Just finished this.
Oh my goodness
The plaid along the top is distracting. A solid dark color will vanish where the lines draw my eye out of the shot. This may be why I don't like point #3...
The spotlight is almost blown, it may be in the middle. Either way, it is too focused instead of being spread out and diffused over a bigger area. I would like to see it bigger and less intense. I think that would help a lot. I like the underexposure but I am a fan of under/overexposed images when it works.
Again, I am not sure about this either, but I wonder if the feet/hands are too centered left to right. Up/down is great. The hands being lower than the feet instead of being level is great. It is just too centered left to right.
Regardless, it is precious and beautiful. Way more so than the overdone little hand gripping one finger. Nice job.
Thanks misskitty. I printed an 8x10 and the flaws stand out.